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Jin Chey | 승인2018.09.15 23:29
  • Matt C 2018-10-08 19:56:52

    I think that this must have been a good experience for you. Like they said below, it would be fabulous if you added a personal anecdote. All in all, though, this article was able to give me insight on athletic activities student athletes partake in.   삭제

    • Rachel Lee 2018-10-06 14:25:31

      As someone who hasn't been involved in athletic activities, I didn't know much about the opportunities provided to student athletes, so this article gave me a lot of insight on that topic! Like Jaehong said underneath, I would also appreciate if you gave us a personal anecdote as well!   삭제

      • Jaehong Min 2018-09-29 19:27:10

        I think it's very admirable that you're passionate about sports, especially a difficult one like soccer. There were some instances where vocabulary use was a bit clunky, but you did a good job on delivering your experience overall. I think it would have been fun to hear a more specific anecdote!   삭제

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